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aurelio Special Jonin
Number of posts : 171 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:26 am | |
| - MJM wrote:
- How'd you get them?
0.o if you are serious, send me a private message. | |
| | | aurelio Special Jonin
Number of posts : 171 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:23 am | |
| my "broken" card: idea is to put him in play instead of "shino insect warriors" by the effect of growth,, so he will have 4/3 on a turn 2. if it's possible for the first insect to survive, and to enjoy the company of this shino's insects, there is a possibility to have 3-5 insect on turn 3, and to force 1 of your opponent's ninja to suffer great penalty . that possibility could increase if you play somehow "sakura's decision" on sakura, so you could have enough chakra from mission, from growthed shino, and maybe 1 charged chakra from your hand. that could be interesting. | |
| | | Sandboxkid Genin
Number of posts : 30 Age : 47 Location : Lakeland,FL Registration date : 2010-03-17
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:16 am | |
| Here is my entry for this week.... I figured I'd make a Deidara that tries to blow up everything,much like he tried against Sasuke. | |
| | | UchihaKyoji23 Chunin
Number of posts : 97 Age : 38 Location : Mist Village W-B, PA Registration date : 2010-03-20
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:15 am | |
| well here is my entry | |
| | | Lovely Ino Special Jonin
Number of posts : 134 Location : Cloud Village Group : Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2010-03-08
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:24 am | |
| Well, here's my entry. Until the inevitible errata, it's hard to be more overpowered, I think... Madara's got nothing on Iyashi. - Spoiler:
Your eyesight just become two categories worst after trying to read his microscopic effect.
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| | | venkelos Jonin
Number of posts : 451 Age : 43 Location : 10 miles NE of the Middle of Nowhere Registration date : 2008-12-04
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:43 pm | |
| My entry for broken-week; maybe not too broken, but I do like him, and he might be pretty bad, given the right circumstances. I was going to let my cheese Danzo stand in for me, but then I found a pic I liked, and an idea I liked more. Some few of you might remember back to my original fanfic, which featured Mikomi Haruno. Her two teammates never got quite the card-screen time that she did, though, so they aren't as easy to remember. Anyway, one of them was Munashii Tsuyoi, a boy with literal shadow powers. I won't bore you with details, but he was, for a time, trapped in an incorporeal state, and while he has surpassed that problem since, he can still use it to avoid harm. He also has gained access to his void powers, literally null energy; anything he touches can be destroyed. So, he has both of those. When you add in several nifty jutsus I made for him, he becomes an unholy terror. As for the card, itself, Munashii cannot be damaged, hence he will probably have ridiculous field life (even for a broken card, I just didn't feel like also adding unaffected by opponent's effects), and he can decimate whole teams, potentially. With the number of damaging jutsus he can use, several of which are for him, he is dangerous, indeed. He also has access to the shadow jutsus Shikamaru can use, except he lacks Mental Power, but so does Shikaku. If nothing else, it was fun to get to make another card of this character, after so long. Sorry it's ginormous, but PhotoBucket is acting rather spastastic, today, when it comes to resizing things. | |
| | | naruto4ever Anbu
Number of posts : 630 Age : 31 Location : The Mist Village,NY Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-11-01
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:02 pm | |
| Hello, I must apologize for not judging last week, how ever I am going to this week for both weeks.
Week 1: Your task was to create an Akatsuki card, lets see how everyone did.
Aurelio (Zetsu) Picture: 4.5/5 Looks weird not sure if its Anime or not. Grammar: 3/5 The effect should be worded: Valid: During the Showdown if this Ninja was not sent out to Battle, you can add this Ninja’s Support value to one of your Battling Teams in the Calculation of Team power. Effect: 4/5 It fits Zetsu but seem a little underwhelming. Creativity: 4/5 Its cool but its still all about how mysterious he is.
(Total: 15.5/20)
UchihaKyoji23 (Kisame Hoshigaki) Picture: 4/5 Rather blurry and it pretty commonly used. Grammar: 3/5 It should read like this: When this Ninja is put into play discard all of your opponent’s Chakras. In that case, move the same number of cards discarded from your Discard Pile to your Chakra area.
Valid: Jutsu cards used by your opponent’s Ninjas 1 additional cost (any Symbol). Effect: 4.25/5 It’s a Kisame effect. Creativity: 3.5/5 Its to used Kisame = Discard opponent’s chakra boring.
Total (14.75/20)
satanspawngenma (Kakuzu) Picture-5/5 Awesome picture. Grammar: 3/5 Some major mess ups. It should be worded: Valid: When this Ninja would be discarded due to the Showdown, you can place 1 Ninja Blade coin (symbolizing a Heart coin) on this Ninja instead. When this Ninja has 5 “Heart” coins on it discard card this Ninja. Effect: 4.5/5 Its good fits his Immortal theme. Creativity: 4/5 Nothing to special just more Immortal stuff.
Total (16.5/20)
venkelos (Konan) Picture: 4/5 Awesome but blurry and not really that anime. Grammar: 4.5/5 It looks good maybe a few minor cap errors nothing needs major changing. Effect: 5/5 Gotta say I love this card. Creativity: 5/5 Venk youve out done your self.
(Total: 18.5/20)
Shakky (Hidan & Kakuzu) Picture: 4/5 The Kakuzu is nice but Hidan is over used. Grammar: 3.75/5 Some Cap errors nothing bad but your effect/effect name is to far to the left. Effect: 3.5/5 Alright Team Immortal with draw no draw backs though hmm its also rather broken. Creativity: 3.5/5 It looks like you were trying to take effects from 3 cards and use them Hidan,Kakauzu, and the 4 souls of Kakuzu.
(Total: 14.75/20)
Sandboxkid (Tobi) Picture 4/5 It’s a rather used tobi picture. Grammar: 3/5 Should be worded as such: When this Ninja is sent out to Battle, you can place 1 Ninja Blade coin (symbolizing a Teleport coin) on 1 of your in-play Ninjas. During the Exchange of Jutsu or if this Ninja would be discarded you can discard 2 of your Chakras with a “Fire” Symbol. In that case, place this Ninja in any of your Teams with 1 or more Ninjas with a “Teleport” coin on them in any position.
Valid: During your *Insert Phase Here* you can discard this Ninja. In that case, draw 1 card. Effect: 4.5/5 It’s a neat effect has him showing his powers as well as trying to keep the Staple Tobi [MOM] there. Creativity: 4.5/5 Seems to match a 4th Hokage.
Total (16/20)
Lovely Ino (Kakuzu) Picture: 5/5 you made it and let someone else use it very nice. Grammar: 5/5 It is perfect. Effect: 3.5/5 The first effect seems a little steep for 1 Chakra. Creativity: 5/5 I love it personally, maybe not amazing but very easily a staple in many decks.
(Total: 18.5/20)
Week 2: Your objective was to create a very broken game winning card.
satanspawngenma (Rikudo Sennin) Picture: 4.5/5 There arent many of him so tiny deduction for it looking weird. Grammar: 3/5 There is a lot there to fix, but im to lazy to type it all up. Effect: 5/5 Broken enough! Creativity: 4.5/5 Its alright but it is to closely associated with the TBM narutos.
Total (17/20)
Aurelio (Shino Aburame) Picture: 4.25/5 A rather bland picture for Shino. Grammar: 4.5/5 Phase is a caped word. Effect: 5/5 OMFG So broken. Creativity: 4/5 Not really that creative just a better Shino IW.
Total ( 17.75/20)
Sandboxkid (Deidara) Picture: 4/5 It has been used before. Grammar: 4.5/5 It should be can not may. Also discard 2 Chakras not pay 2 Chakras. Effect: 4.75/5 It kind of lacks the game winning broken ness. Creativity: 4.25/5 Seems like a Beefed up Deidara nothing more same old Bomb coin effect.
Total (17.5/20)
UchihaKyoji23 (Kisame Hoshigaki & Zabuza Momochi) Picture: 4/5 Both Pictures have been used quite a bit. Grammar: 4/5 Look at your last card for fixes. Effect: 4/5 Not really that broken, stops chumps and all but not insanely bad. Creativity: 3/5 This is basically a copy of your Kisame from last week with an added effect.
Total ( 15/20)
Lovely Ino (Iyashi) Picture: 5/5 Awesome! Grammar: 5/5 Every thing check out A ok Effect: 3/5 I think this card isnt that broken its good but not game winning. Though with that new Reanimation Jutsu comming out it’s a good Draw cycle. Creativity: 5/5 Very nice.
Total (18/20)
VENK I CANNOT SEE YOUR CARD!!!
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| | | Lovely Ino Special Jonin
Number of posts : 134 Location : Cloud Village Group : Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2010-03-08
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| - naruto4ever wrote:
- Lovely Ino (Iyashi)
Picture: 5/5 Awesome! Grammar: 5/5 Every thing check out A ok Effect: 3/5 I think this card isnt that broken its good but not game winning. Though with that new Reanimation Jutsu comming out it’s a good Draw cycle. Creativity: 5/5 Very nice.
Total (18/20) His third effect gives him an insta-win with the Reanimation Jutsu unless your opponent has an answer that removes Iyashi, but this is almost 100% going to be turn 1, so... in my opinion, he's pretty game winning. | |
| | | venkelos Jonin
Number of posts : 451 Age : 43 Location : 10 miles NE of the Middle of Nowhere Registration date : 2008-12-04
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:13 pm | |
| Yeah sorry about that; as I said, PB was acting weird, today. It kept mentioning Google Analytics, and not ever finishing something with that. Here is what it looks like, and I hope you can see it. Granted, it's maybe not really broken, so maybe you didn't miss anything. | |
| | | naruto4ever Anbu
Number of posts : 630 Age : 31 Location : The Mist Village,NY Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-11-01
| | | | mendokuse Sannin
Number of posts : 1082 Age : 34 Location : Leaf Village, WA Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-12-03
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:20 am | |
| Umm.... I was gonna judge the broken contest but ok....thanks | |
| | | MJM Sannin
Number of posts : 510 Location : The Mist Village Registration date : 2009-03-12
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:23 pm | |
| Sorry I haven't been posting lately, I just got my Photoshop back to snuff the other day.
Speaking of, no new theme Mendo? It's almost half way through the week. | |
| | | mendokuse Sannin
Number of posts : 1082 Age : 34 Location : Leaf Village, WA Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-12-03
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:10 am | |
| - MJM wrote:
- Sorry I haven't been posting lately, I just got my Photoshop back to snuff the other day.
Speaking of, no new theme Mendo? It's almost half way through the week. Sorry, sorry, yesterday i was busy and today i spent the whole day moving furniture followed by work so im falling behind on stuff sorry guys. | |
| | | venkelos Jonin
Number of posts : 451 Age : 43 Location : 10 miles NE of the Middle of Nowhere Registration date : 2008-12-04
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:40 am | |
| Hey awesome, we're going with my theme. Thanks Mendo! | |
| | | mendokuse Sannin
Number of posts : 1082 Age : 34 Location : Leaf Village, WA Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-12-03
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:25 am | |
| - venkelos wrote:
- Hey awesome, we're going with my theme. Thanks Mendo!
You asked , thus you receive, and you get to be challenger because of it. | |
| | | venkelos Jonin
Number of posts : 451 Age : 43 Location : 10 miles NE of the Middle of Nowhere Registration date : 2008-12-04
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:58 am | |
| Well, then I will make some attempt to be a challenge. Not too sure how well that'll go, but it'll be a little bit fun, nonetheless. Okay, because it is one of my favorite little pieces I have made, mostly because it is a rare example of quality (from me) in character image making, I am going to post acting Hokage Danzo. This is my Reinforcement remake of the original, broken monstrosity, still powerful, but not too bad, in my opinion. - Spoiler:
Here is the mission used to summon my Danzo; I figured Lovely Ino had a point, and posting the mission would be a good idea. As for the Mission, itself, it can assist the card in fitting into an Earth Deck, his other element, possibly allowing you to use less, or no Sharingan cards, or give a lesser, but still Sharingan-bearing Danzo, a nice Sharingan effect. Also, you can recycle Danzo above, if he gets injured, and you have more than one of it in your Reinforcement Deck, thus keeping his Izanagi effect active longer. I suppose it doesn't say when the second effect applies, but neither does the Ritual Mission for Hidan, which is an official card. I also sort of like that this Mission isn't purely beneficial to one card. If they ever made a real Danzo with Sharingan, it could affect him, too; it doesn't just summon a cheese, and then do nothing. The coloring isn't great, but I suppose it isn't the contest entry piece.
Okay, to cover the possessor of Kanrakuton (Cheese Release), this is Hokage Danzo using both Izanagi, along with Sharingans, and Mokuton, in an effort to destroy Madara and Sasuke. He's got the usual stuff for a Danzo, amped up from his new Rank and chakra boost from Wood Release, he's got Sharingan use, as well as Yamato/1st Hokage jutsu use, and my Dual Affinity to possibly make those two differing elements a bit more meshable. At the least, the deck might be more Earth heavy, with the effect of his Mission, so more Tree jutsus might be present (the only "real" Danzo is HC0, so he could fit into an Earth Deck, maybe). Otherwise, Izanagi makes him rather likely to avoid getting hit, though he can't feel his Sharingan Eyes, so he isn't always aware that it's working (hence the flip). I also gave him resistance to removal; I hate the idea of him getting blown off the field; you have to wear him out, to kill him (I will hate Vortex forever). Genjutsu/Tree gives him access to some good jutsus, both the newer Sharingan stuff, and Wood jutsus. Okay, that's it; the bar is set. Good luck everyone.
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| | | aurelio Special Jonin
Number of posts : 171 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:46 pm | |
| my entry. i don't like themes for which anime is not yet aired, so i have to use generic pictures like this one. | |
| | | Nightmaree31 Genin
Number of posts : 41 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:18 pm | |
| 13/0 Healthy might be alittle much when attacking, but I think the raikage is worth it. He did cut off his own forearm just to keep fighting, so gotta give credit where its due. | |
| | | satanspawngenma Special Jonin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 32 Location : Just South of Heaven Registration date : 2010-04-22
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| i did the fifth kazekage(Gaara) for one because he was my favorite kage at the summit and also because i thought the kage summit was a great breakthrough arc for gaara as it is the first time we see him fight since the one tailed demon had been extracted from him, this proved just how powerful he actually is as he couldn't use any demon power. o and just so everyone knows the quote says "Your eyes are still the same.." its hard to see because of the white text on the white background but its what he says to sasuke right before the engage in "combat" | |
| | | MJM Sannin
Number of posts : 510 Location : The Mist Village Registration date : 2009-03-12
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:54 am | |
| Redid the card and made a new one. Ei (pronounced "Ay", like how you pronounce the letter "A") is his real name.
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| | | venkelos Jonin
Number of posts : 451 Age : 43 Location : 10 miles NE of the Middle of Nowhere Registration date : 2008-12-04
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Fri Jun 18, 2010 3:39 pm | |
| - MJM wrote:
- Hmmm... I know this looks a little bad because SSG posted before me but here's my card that might be changed later on if I don't like it. So here it is:
I liked the pic it's pretty clear and he's looking up, that's why his eyes are "weird"...
The villagers support him as always so he gets a BP Third Hokage type effect.
The second effet allows you to use Mastery on meh Jutsu but draw cards instead, meaning he's there for change.
Mastery so lowered stats. Overall, a very cool card. I REALLY like that second effect; it's very nice. I also like that you spelled "Fifth". I've always liked it better this way. | |
| | | Nightmaree31 Genin
Number of posts : 41 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| | | | satanspawngenma Special Jonin
Number of posts : 132 Age : 32 Location : Just South of Heaven Registration date : 2010-04-22
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:37 am | |
| yes, i agree with nightmare who do i have to talk to to get reinforcement and squad templates. | |
| | | Nightmaree31 Genin
Number of posts : 41 Registration date : 2010-03-06
| Subject: Re: Mendo's Ongoing tourney Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:40 am | |
| - satanspawngenma wrote:
- yes, i agree with nightmare who do i have to talk to to get reinforcement and squad templates.
Yeah my Current reinforcement cards look like regular Ninja cards but say REINFORCEMENT lmao | |
| | | mendokuse Sannin
Number of posts : 1082 Age : 34 Location : Leaf Village, WA Group : Proctor, Ino-Shika-Cho Registration date : 2008-12-03
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