Mendo's Ongoing tourney

mendokuse wrote:

Next theme and etc is up. As usual please check Post 2, Page1. Also do not forget to take a guess at my fav character from this weeks theme for a chance to get bonus points.

why the hell did you guys not take off points for each spelling error on cards; n4e took off .5 points for 5 errors (Battling, Battle, Ninja's, Team x2) so why only -.1! It shoulda been -.25 for each error, not -.1

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Next theme and etc is up. As usual please check Post 2, Page1. Also do not forget to take a guess at my fav character from this weeks theme for a chance to get bonus points.

why the hell did you guys not take off points for each spelling error on cards; n4e took off .5 points for 5 errors (Battling, Battle, Ninja's, Team x2) so why only -.1! It shoulda been -.25 for each error, not -.1

I did do -.25 for spellings, apparently i just missed alot lol.

My entry for this week:


I'll be the first one to admit that the effect and the image might not match up; he was still ensconced in that stupid Hiroku thing during the battle with Kankuro, but that isn't to say that he needs Hiroku to mess with other people's puppets. Also, the effect is sort of powerful, considering the popularity of puppets in the current metagame, so adding the slightly harder to summon requirements seemed fair. Besides, this is my favorite format of Sasorithey gave us, yet. Now, if only a few other cool Ninjas would get the silly "his name is slightly different, so I can have 6, rather than 3" thing going...

Anyway, he covers the "I made Kankuro's puppets" angle, and can make them useless. I made it a little bigger, so hopefully, it will be a little less blurry.

So, fearing the wrath of the puppets, your favorite character hopefully would be Sasori.

I'll post mine later

well since my computer's down, i guess i'll just use this


and i think your fave character is Gaara

This is sad people, its friday and I only have 2 entries. Don't let this be like the battle of the sannin that only had 3 entries.

When's the last day to post a card?

MJM wrote:

When's the last day to post a card?

today

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

MJM wrote:

When's the last day to post a card?

today

Tomorrow, dude its like in huge bold text people its always on sunday.

mendokuse wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

MJM wrote:

When's the last day to post a card?

today

Tomorrow, dude its like in huge bold text people its always on sunday.

honestly, why don't people read it...

i'm gonna say your fav character is gaara. i would've entered one but i couldnt think of a good effect. anyway, here's my entry. GO DEIDARA!!!!!!!

I'm also going to say your favorite character is Gaara of the Desert.

But guess who takes him... Deidara!

I guess Gaara_ of the Desert would be your favorite character.

my entry:



cardcompletelymadebypaintftl!

is anyone going to judge? its 10:19 here and still no judges...

Both of my comps wont let me see the cards.

Guess I'm judging alone. Sorry I'm late I can't help it when I'm given a closing shift. I'll get right to the judging in a bit then release the next theme.

Hehehe here I go again changing the judging base sorry I'm
trying to find something new that works balanced.

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

Effect: 3.5/4
Ok so he prepares for going psycho with his jutsus. I'm not sure if this should
be a SR though.
You forgot to say "of your Chakras"

Playability: 1/2
It's hard to see this beat the one we got already. But it could work in a
different more jutsu based fun type deck or twist on earth.

Creativity: 2/3
Pics been used but the effect's cool.

Grammar: 0/2
Battle, Team, Symbol, Bomb should be caps. Coins shouldn't be. Spelling errors
are, Entrance, an, Let's. Chakras not Chakra's. no "" around Bomb.
Umm, there's possibly more but you already went under 0 so im stopping now. SRY

Quality: 2/4
Lack of drop shadow, See through bottom, rough cut on other things.

Total: 8.5/15

[quote="Shadow Shikamaru"]



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Effect: 3.75/4
can not may, really though i can't think of a time bandai used may, though i
admit it seems better in many situations. Great effect though.

Playability: 1.5/2
Truthfully, I like it. You have the OC gaara but its only on defense so this
could help more offensive players that dont want to run that crappy pride or
whatever one.

Creativity: 2.75/3
I love it. Effects new though it would cause poeple to get rule techy, so no
more separate pile for emina type thing. Pics good.

Grammar: 1.75/2
Deck caps.


Quality: 3.5/4
I wanna give you full but things get funky above the text box right side.


Total: 13.25/15

venkelos wrote:

Effect: 1/4
Man, Earth? If it weren't for that I'd say awesome. I think like if it were
discrd X, X equals opponents puppets +1 wind only chakra, then this effect
would be bomb, and should be a rare becasue it only hits 1 type of thing. But
this would be the perfect counter to the fact that kankurou seems to be in
every deck these days.
And like anaki its "of your Chakras" gotta specify or else you might
be able to discard your opponents lol. Also i dont think you need to name both
combat and support, i think printed power is enough.

Playability: .5/2
No very playable thats the problem.

Creativity: 1.5/3
Love it, though pics used.

Grammar: 1.75/2
Symbols caps.


Quality: 3/4
Templates a bit blurry. Hand cost is rough cut. Error on upper bar of template.

Total: 7.75/15

MJM wrote:

Effect: 3.5/4
There's a flaw in your effect. For you to first use it you need to have at least 1 Bomb coin out there. Since you cant pay for X with 0 and you cant pay 1 when there isnt at least 1 guy out therw with a Bomb coin. But who knows maybe that wasn't a mistake or maybe it was but a good one. Since it combos well with the new deidara that dies and places mass bomb coins.

Playability: 1/2
SR deidara still beats this.

Creativity: 1.5/3
Built in Jutsu, its ok. Pics ok to.

Grammar: 2/2
Nice

Quality: 2.5/4
Templates blurry. Pics too small. Outlines rough. Ninja Blade, EC, and HC are rough cut.

Total: 10.5/15

cool_guy wrote:

Effect: 4/4
I love it, now this i would want to play in my puppet deck.

Playability: 2/2
Highly playable talking that puppets is swarming right now.

Creativity: 2.5/3
Pretty good. Sorta a puppet version of that new substitution thing.

Grammar: 1.5/2
You misses at least 1 comma, and Entrance cost needs caps.

Quality: 2.25/4
No drop shadow, i cant read your flavor text sry, pic render is rough, EC is rough, yur text goes a bit to far it touches the ninja blade, your pic should be bigger. Small dot on wind symbol.

Total: 12.25/15

Totals wrote:

Anaki: 8.5/15 You gotta watch your spelling and caps.
Shadow Shika: 13.5/15 Awesome card.
Venkelos: 7.75/15 Earth was your down fall.
MJM: 10.5/15 Small things here and there added up against you.
cool_guy: 12.25/15 Your quality was your downfall. I gotta admit it though, yours was my favorite card.

BTW before I get asked, what about the Guessing game, No one guessed right. The answer was Chiyo, btw thanks anaki for letting me jack yur card, rofl since not even you noticed the hint I hid. I admit its not a direct hint but maybe it'll make you guys look closer next time.


BTW since no one got it I gave it to the runner up, Deidara which only N4E guessed. So if anyone was wondering thats why he got points this week even though he didnt judge. SRY, you dont get judge points if you dont judge.

Can't believe I put Earth, instead of Wind. "banging head on desk" Oh well.

Here's what it SHOULD have looked like, not that it matters.

venkelos wrote:

Can't believe I put Earth, instead of Wind. "banging head on desk" Oh well.

Here's what it SHOULD have looked like, not that it matters.

The funny thing is that really was your downfall, if you didnt put earth then majority of hte points you lost woulda come back. Sry.

That was the point of Deidara's effect. Since it kills Ninja it shouldn't place Bomb Coins before you use it.

MJM wrote:

That was the point of Deidara's effect. Since it kills Ninja it shouldn't place Bomb Coins before you use it.

That came to mind that's why you didnt lose a ton of points. The main reason for pointloss was cause its tough to place bomb coins if deidara doesnt do it.

Wow, I did good I guess.

But yeah, the quality of a card completely made by paint isn't the same as the card made by GIMP/Photoshop.

I could've won if SS wasn't in ma way

can i judge this week please... ps isn't letting me redownload it yet

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

can i judge this week please... ps isn't letting me redownload it yet

Let me talk with N4E if he's cool with it yah. I think both of your PS's are down right now.