Mendo I'm Calling you Out!

Okay mendo, we haven't gone at it yet, so I think we should. Accept or deny the challenge, i frankly don't care. Just that I've already lost to n4e so I'm shooting for the second best *BAM*

I already have my card for the tourney

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Okay mendo, we haven't gone at it yet, so I think we should. Accept or deny the challenge, i frankly don't care. Just that I've already lost to n4e so I'm shooting for the second best *BAM*

I already have my card for the tourney

Ill judge. 1 thing do give mendo some time to make a card he has to make 3 for our tourney give him some time.

naruto4ever wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Okay mendo, we haven't gone at it yet, so I think we should. Accept or deny the challenge, i frankly don't care. Just that I've already lost to n4e so I'm shooting for the second best *BAM*

I already have my card for the tourney

Ill judge. 1 thing do give mendo some time to make a card he has to make 3 for our tourney give him some time.

kay

gots my card

I'll accept. Once though i gotta make 2 for N4E's challange first.

mendokuse wrote:

I'll accept. Once though i gotta make 2 for N4E's challange first.

Well im still having trouble making cards. Im a faliure.

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

I'll accept. Once though i gotta make 2 for N4E's challange first.

Well im still having trouble making cards. Im a faliure.

You are not a failure.

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

I'll accept. Once though i gotta make 2 for N4E's challange first.

Well im still having trouble making cards. Im a faliure.

You are not a failure.

I feel like 1. I had a sakura theme and the sakura sucks the jutsu was sweet but the mission is hard.

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

I'll accept. Once though i gotta make 2 for N4E's challange first.

Well im still having trouble making cards. Im a faliure.

You are not a failure.

I feel like 1. I had a sakura theme and the sakura sucks the jutsu was sweet but the mission is hard.

Eh, I failed on my first theme attempt as you saw i couldnt cut out the pic.

Alright I finished mine for N4E's match, now to move onto the thinking phase for my card against you. I'll try to have something up by the end of today, depends how quickly i can get an idea.

OK here's what I made.

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Picture-5/5 Very nice. The outline is great as well as drop shadow. The only thing is it looks like 5 tailed naruto.

Text-5/5 looks good.

Effect-4/5 The effect is broken. I mean its better but heres why its broken. First it cannot be effected by effects so his effect wont work on him self, so lets say the 2 other ninjas in your team are already injured then your getting now downside from this card but your opponent does.

Overall-4.75/5 The bottom shippuden is a little rough. Also the white line on the bottom is cut off.

mendokuse wrote:

Pic-4.75/5 Its good just not 100% anime also the drop shadow is a little to much.

Text-4.5/5 Every things good just the spacing between the characteristics.

Effect-5/5 Its a really good effect and fits shikamaru.

Overall-4.75/5 The only thing wrong is the drop shadow on the Flavor text. Also the template is a bit off towards the top circle but no points were deductied/

Ok so for the totals i have

ShadowShikamaru-18.75/20
Mendokuse-19/20

Wow close. Will there be another judge?

naruto4ever wrote:

Ok so for the totals i have

ShadowShikamaru-18.5/20
Mendokuse-19/20

Wow close. Will there be another judge?

Yah, we just need someone to show up. Matches always have 2 judges.

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

Ok so for the totals i have

ShadowShikamaru-18.5/20
Mendokuse-19/20

Wow close. Will there be another judge?

Yah, we just need someone to show up. Matches always have 2 judges.

Might i suggest Anaki_Uchiha he is a good judge.

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

Ok so for the totals i have

ShadowShikamaru-18.5/20
Mendokuse-19/20

Wow close. Will there be another judge?

Yah, we just need someone to show up. Matches always have 2 judges.

Might i suggest Anaki_Uchiha he is a good judge.

I'll go PM him then.

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

Ok so for the totals i have

ShadowShikamaru-18.5/20
Mendokuse-19/20

Wow close. Will there be another judge?

Yah, we just need someone to show up. Matches always have 2 judges.

Might i suggest Anaki_Uchiha he is a good judge.

I'll go PM him then.

Cool

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

gots my card

Picture 5/5
I don't really see anything wrong. nice job.

Text 5/5
again, nothing wrong.

effect 4/5 effect much better, but like n4ever said, still broken. Maybe make the effect, When this Ninja is sent out to battle, give 1 damage to 1 Ninja on both fields, or something like that. Or you could change the effect altogether. maybe make it something like this: Valid: When this Ninja is sent out to attack, discard 1 of your chakras. If you do not, give 1 damage to this Ninja.

Overall 4.5/5
well, other than the effect it looks good. Your cards seem to look almost perfect now, so the effects are the only real thing to fix.

total: 18.5/20

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

how is the part with the picture fair? If he found a non-anime-ish picture and used it, take off for it. Don't go and just let him slide because he found it there and most of them aren't animeish...

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

how is the part with the picture fair? If he found a non-anime-ish picture and used it, take off for it. Don't go and just let him slide because he found it there and most of them aren't animeish...

I wouldnt complain your picture isn't exactly anime, its also a colored in manga pic yet you lost no points.

mendokuse wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

how is the part with the picture fair? If he found a non-anime-ish picture and used it, take off for it. Don't go and just let him slide because he found it there and most of them aren't animeish...

I wouldnt complain your picture isn't exactly anime, its also a colored in manga pic yet you lost no points.

because it looks like it was from the anime, yours looks like a colored picture

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

how is the part with the picture fair? If he found a non-anime-ish picture and used it, take off for it. Don't go and just let him slide because he found it there and most of them aren't animeish...

It looks fine to me...
Nevermind. Keep me out of this argument

Chibi Clone wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

OK here's what I made.

picture 4.75/5
looks pretty good, just not completely anime-ish.didn't take much off though cause if you found it on deviantart, most of the stuff is like that.

text 4.75/5
the characteristics could be a little higher up and spaced, but other than that good.

Effect 5/5
I love the effect for this one. its original, not broken, and fits shika perfectly.

Overall 4.75/5
don't see much wrong. just fix up the little things and its good.

total: 19.25

how is the part with the picture fair? If he found a non-anime-ish picture and used it, take off for it. Don't go and just let him slide because he found it there and most of them aren't animeish...

It looks fine to me...
Nevermind. Keep me out of this argument

check out the NUNS Shikamaru render you made and then look at his picture, then check the colors and shading. You'll see a difference