Who wants to try against mendo?

naruto4ever wrote:

Ok well just finished its not my best work or i dont think it is but it should hold its own.

5/5 picture
I don't really see anything wrong. its a good pic, colored nicely, and fits good.

4.5/5 text
I see only one or two errors, the main one being the last line should read: for ever lightning chakra in your chakra area, not lightning chakra's.then, maybe the text could be a little bolder. other than that good.

5/5 effect/cost/rarety
everything seems good here. Nice effect, the cost is sufficient, and the rarety suits the card.

4.8/5 overall
Really nice card overall. Not many problems, and everything seems realistic. Only the really in-depth details need to be fixed and it could earn a full score. nice job.

Total Score:19.3/20

mendokuse wrote:

Ok let the battle of the double rasengans begin, its up to you now judges.

5/5 picture
nice picture. it looks good, is bright and cleanly colored, and fits the picture

5/5 text
I don't see anything wrong with the text either. its all a good size, neat, correctly edited, and looks real.

4.5/5 effect/cost/rarety
well, the only thing is that it may be too good. lets say they make a card like your sage naruto to get chakra, well for this card, you pay 3 lightning, 5 any chakra, and you can give damage to 5 ninjas, while getting +12?! I really like the effect, but I think it may be a little too good. maybe make it just +X. or maybe Y=X+2 or something. the cost and rarety both seem good though.

5/5 Overall
Well, exept for the effect being a little uber powerful, the card is basiclly perfect. Nice job.

Total Score:19.5

Wow, it came really close on my side. the win being by 2/10th a point.

Sooooo,

Naruto4ever
total:37.8/40.

Mendokuse
Total: 38.3/40



The winner is Mendokuse by .5 of a point. nice job both of you.

so the totals are:

Naruto4ever: 18.5 + 19.3 = 37.8/40

Mendokuse: 19 + 19.5 = 38.5/40

The winner is.................

MENDOKUSE

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

so the totals are:

Naruto4ever: 18.5 + 19.3 = 37.8/40

Mendokuse: 19 + 19.5 = 38.5/40

The winner is.................

MENDOKUSE

well,one of us are wrong with points, but either way the winner is the same. still, nice job both of you.

Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.

mendokuse wrote:

Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.

how about you and me now?

Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.

Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.

naruto4ever wrote:

Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.

#1 i did notice and am surprised i didnt get nicked for. As for #2 yah thats hard.

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.

how about you and me now?

Sure, it'll take me a bit though. I'll try to get one up by sunday or monday because first i have to make one for thayli's tourney and I'm playing at a tourney every saturday.