HELP!?!?!??!?!

I think im going crazy i cant make a non broken card!!!!

ok im making 3 cards tell me how they can be fixed!

Naruto Uzumaki
Leaf | Male | Sage | Clone Status

Ec:5 Hc:1

[POWER OF THE SAGE]

Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with "Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage" the Jutsu card becomes 2 "Lightning" or 2 "Wind" Chakras.

5/1 (Healthy) 7/1 (injured)
Super Rare.

Now im thinking its not to broke but with the jutsus it is so i think adding a Valid: This Ninja cannot be in a Team with an other Ninjas.
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Then we have

Double Rasengan
Lightning | Lightning | Lightning | Any

Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage"

Target: (1) User
(2) 1 Ninja Battling against the user

Effect: Target (1) gets +9/+0 during the turn. In addition target (2) gets 1 Damage for every "Lightning" Chakras in our Chakra area.

Ok now i dont think this is really that broke but opinions please
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Finally

Rasenshuriken
Lightning | Lightning | Lightning | Wind

Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage"

Target: User

Effect: The target gets +10/+0 during the turn. In addition give 1 Damage to every Ninja Battling againt the target's Team. In that case, Discard all of your Chakras.

No comment on this i think you know why.
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Ok no i beg ANY ONE PLEASE HELP ME MAKE THESE LESS BROKEN. but keep the same idea of the card. and keep it realistic please and thanks.

Naruto isnt too bad, but I would add another requirment like only on attack if you really want to make sure its balanced.

Double Rasengan should have Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" or "Jiraiya", and "Sage Mode"
I'm pretty sure Jiraiya can do that jutsu too.

Truthfully the jutsus aren't too powerful for how much they cost, its the only paying 2 light or 2 wind that would make it broken so I would keep the focus on making naruto not so broke by restricting him.

mendokuse wrote:

Naruto isnt too bad, but I would add another requirment like only on attack if you really want to make sure its balanced.

Double Rasengan should have Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" or "Jiraiya", and "Sage Mode"
I'm pretty sure Jiraiya can do that jutsu too.

Truthfully the jutsus aren't too powerful for how much they cost, its the only paying 2 light or 2 wind that would make it broken so I would keep the focus on making naruto not so broke by restricting him.

Alright i get what your saying.

So im not sure how but naruto's effect would be something like this

Valid: This Ninja cannot be included in a Team with any Ninjas

Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with
"Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage" the Jutsu cost becomes 2
"Lightning" or 2 "Wind" Chakras. This effect can only be used when this Ninja is sent out as the attacker.

Something like that??

As for the Double Rasengan I think adding the Jiraiya is a Great idea.

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Naruto isnt too bad, but I would add another requirment like only on attack if you really want to make sure its balanced.

Double Rasengan should have Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" or "Jiraiya", and "Sage Mode"
I'm pretty sure Jiraiya can do that jutsu too.

Truthfully the jutsus aren't too powerful for how much they cost, its the only paying 2 light or 2 wind that would make it broken so I would keep the focus on making naruto not so broke by restricting him.

Alright i get what your saying.

So im not sure how but naruto's effect would be something like this

Valid: This Ninja cannot be included in a Team with any Ninjas

Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with
"Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage" the Jutsu cost becomes 2
"Lightning" or 2 "Wind" Chakras. This effect can only be used when this Ninja is sent out as the attacker.

Something like that??

As for the Double Rasengan I think adding the Jiraiya is a Great idea.

Nah cause if you do that no one would ever want to play the card. Dont matter how strong he is, slap a tsunade and a gigfan down and that naruto can say gg. So i would restrict it in different means.

As to Jiraiya its your choice but i jsut realized i was wrong, Jiraiya does Oodama rasengan or super rasengan or somehting like that, not double, my bad on that.

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Naruto isnt too bad, but I would add another requirment like only on attack if you really want to make sure its balanced.

Double Rasengan should have Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" or "Jiraiya", and "Sage Mode"
I'm pretty sure Jiraiya can do that jutsu too.

Truthfully the jutsus aren't too powerful for how much they cost, its the only paying 2 light or 2 wind that would make it broken so I would keep the focus on making naruto not so broke by restricting him.

Alright i get what your saying.

So im not sure how but naruto's effect would be something like this

Valid: This Ninja cannot be included in a Team with any Ninjas

Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with
"Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage" the Jutsu cost becomes 2
"Lightning" or 2 "Wind" Chakras. This effect can only be used when this Ninja is sent out as the attacker.

Something like that??

As for the Double Rasengan I think adding the Jiraiya is a Great idea.

why not try this:

Valid: This Ninja can only be included in a Team with "Leaf" Ninjas.

Valid: When this Ninja is sent out to Attack and becomes the User of a Jutsu card with "Requirements: 'Naruto Uzumaki' + 'Sage'", the Jutsu cost of that card becomes 2 "Lightning" or "Wind" Chakras.

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

naruto4ever wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Naruto isnt too bad, but I would add another requirment like only on attack if you really want to make sure its balanced.

Double Rasengan should have Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" or "Jiraiya", and "Sage Mode"
I'm pretty sure Jiraiya can do that jutsu too.

Truthfully the jutsus aren't too powerful for how much they cost, its the only paying 2 light or 2 wind that would make it broken so I would keep the focus on making naruto not so broke by restricting him.

Alright i get what your saying.

So im not sure how but naruto's effect would be something like this

Valid: This Ninja cannot be included in a Team with any Ninjas

Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with
"Requirements: "Naruto Uzumaki" + "Sage" the Jutsu cost becomes 2
"Lightning" or 2 "Wind" Chakras. This effect can only be used when this Ninja is sent out as the attacker.

Something like that??

As for the Double Rasengan I think adding the Jiraiya is a Great idea.

why not try this:

Valid: This Ninja can only be included in a Team with "Leaf" Ninjas.

Valid: When this Ninja is sent out to Attack and becomes the User of a Jutsu card with "Requirements: 'Naruto Uzumaki' + 'Sage'", the Jutsu cost of that card becomes 2 "Lightning" or "Wind" Chakras.

Not bad Not bad at all.

Well how about instead of Giving it the Effect to lower Jutsu cost i try something like....

Jirayia/Orochimaru/Tsunade "Presence" So he cant be chump blocked.

or make it an OC hahahahaha NO!

Or try something that hasnt been done like.....

Valid: When this Ninja put in-play, search your deck,hand,and discard pile for every Ninja with "Naruto Uzumaki" in its name. Show it to your opponent and shuffle your deck. Then Place the cards in your Chakra area face down.

Vaild: When this Ninja would be discarded due to the Showdown, Discard 1 of the Face down Chakras in that case place this Ninja in your Village in Healthy Status.


I personally like the last one but i need some help wording it also with the last one it follows the Manga more so that the origional 1. So if someone can find how to word it properly i might use that.

I wouldnt do the face down chakra thing, I'd either put it in your hand or come up with somewhere else like remove it from game and then say if this Naruto dies form showdown you can replace it with a naruto that has been removed from game in healthy status or such. Thats prolly not the right wording but i think you get the idea.

the first one just sucks...the last two of course their broken when there not broken h*ll will freeze over