I challenge Naruto4ever

does you accept?

Yes, I accept!

awesome the challenge is simple make a tsunade. any tsunade weither it be childhood younger days or recent.

time is 2 weeks and 3 judges

cool?

for judges mendo, MJM, and lovley ino?

shakky wrote:

for judges mendo, MJM, and lovley ino?

That sounds like a good line up to me.

sure

here by my entery

My Entry:


Sorry forgot about this >.<

naruto4ever wrote:

My Entry:


Sorry forgot about this >.<

this is a nice card!!! but i have a question. doesn't she become a sannin after her boyfriend dies? i thought she was still a jonin here. but i digrece it is an awesome card and no prblem i think i made the time lapse to long lol

You are correct, but if you look at the young sannin from Lineage of Legends they had Sannin so I gave it to her.

naruto4ever wrote:

You are correct, but if you look at the young sannin from Lineage of Legends they had Sannin so I gave it to her.

true...lol i forgot to add "sanin" to her stat although she "gave up" her sanin "rank" to be hokage but yeah lol

hey judges can you when you can please judge lol

N4E:

Picture: 5/5
Effect: 2/5
Busted, negating over half of opponent field and easy healing. Both valid, its way too much. Really shouldn't be sannin even if bandai did mess up on old card.
Text: 4.75/5
Missing period in flavor text. Either that or it runs on too long and needs one.
Playability: 5/5
Creativity: 3/5
Basic team style heal with mass negation, meh. Pics awesome though and you dont see too many young tsunade.

Shakky:

Picture: 3.75/5
Pixelated character, rough outline, pixelated template. No set symbol.
Effect: 4/5
This should be a rare. It can grab any sakura even a turn 3 or maybe later when they make her so this could be near busted.
Text: 1.5/5
Name is wrong, no set number, text looks off, tons of grammar errors throughout. Designer by is done wrong also- wrong font, wrong color, wrong size
Playability: 4.5/5
Most would choose healer over this, but its got good draw and some major abuse factor if you can find a good sakura or use to squad in kunoichi.
Creativity: 4/5
Nice draw and team work thing going, its not super creative but its good.

N4E
Total: 19.75/25
Shakky
Total: 17.75/25

Thanks Mendo i know fonts are all wrong...Never figured out which one they are yet but im getting close lol

I'm sorry for the wait. Please excuse my tardiness. If it is acceptable, I would still like to put forward my thoughts.

Naruto4ever

Text: 3.5
Flavor text should probably be:
"Hey Nawaki, come here for a second. I have something for you."
In the first effect, I believe that the "While this Ninja is in play" is implied, it is unrequired. However, I believe it should include the distinction "all of your opponent's in-play 'Male' Ninjas..."
In the second effect, it should be:
"...is sent out to Battle in a Team of 3 or more Ninjas..."

Effect: 4/5
In my opinion, female decks have a lot of great support, so I agree with mendokuse's thoughts that such massive negation could be a bit much. To improve it, it could effect both sides; in a female deck, this would be almost negligible, but it would give the illusion of a drawback, at least. Alternately, perhaps since the effect is "young beauty of the leaf", it could only effect Leaf+Male?
I like the second effect though.

Graphic: 4.5/5
I feel like the effect text should be smaller. It fits just fine within the text box, but there is no space in between the two effects, and almost no space between the first effect and the effect name. Even if it reduces readability, the spaces between lines seems to be important to bandai; there are several times that they have reduced the text size to make room for empty space in between lines. Not sure if that makes sense.

Creativity: 3/5
Nothing really unprecedented here. Both effects are pretty basic, and if I would've liked to see her without Sannin. I understand that the bandai card had it, but they make some strange decisions from time to time, and I feel like this card would've been better without it. Additionally, reduced entrance cost and stats might've been appropriate, but those are just my thoughts.

Total: 15/20


Shakky

Text: 2/5
There are a lot of little mistakes here and there with the effect text, I think it should be something more like this:

Quote :

When this Ninja is put in play, search your Deck for 1 "Sakura Haruno" Ninja card and put in play.
VALID: When this Ninja is sent out to Battle in the same Team as "Sakura Haruno", this Ninja gets +2/+2 during the turn.
VALID: When this Ninja wins a Victory or Outstanding Victory while in the same team as "Sakura Haruno", you can draw 2 cards.

Effect: 3.5/5
I think that this could be an SR, if anything. It's actually not hard to get Tsunade out sooner that turn 6, and she becomes an unequaled draw engine with just a few victories. I feel like all of these effects are too much; maybe pick two of them and drop the third? Haha, maybe.

Graphics: 3/5
Picture is a little grainy. Also, it looks like you applied a stroke outline to cover up poor rendering, but it's a little thick. The card uses the wrong font, the thing that sticks out the most is that the one you used is sans serifs, while bandai's is not. Like naruto4ever's, there's no spacing between the effects, and the "VALID" isn't bold. Rarity, card number, and set symbol would be nice.

Creativity: 3/5
Nothing really unprecedented in these effects. There are a lot of effects that "partner" characters have had throughout the sets, and this Tsunade essentially seems to just be a collection of all of them in one. I appreciate that you added a drawing effect to support wind's archetype, but I think it would've been better if it was something a little more inspired.

Total: 12.5/20

shakky wrote:

Thanks Mendo i know fonts are all wrong...Never figured out which one they are yet but im getting close lol

since there is no one who is willing to share "knowledge" with you, i will tell you it is: "itc elan book" font. since no one is willing to share it, i guess you will have to pay for it.

see you around.

aurelio wrote:

shakky wrote:

Thanks Mendo i know fonts are all wrong...Never figured out which one they are yet but im getting close lol

since there is no one who is willing to share "knowledge" with you, i will tell you it is: "itc elan book" font. since no one is willing to share it, i guess you will have to pay for it.

see you around.

The fonts were already named off in the card making for newppl thread back on bandai. The specific sizings and such are not however. Also, there are multiple fonts on cards.

Elan ITC std "Book", Allencon Demo, and Times New Roman are the fonts I use on my cards.

mendokuse wrote:

aurelio wrote:

shakky wrote:

Thanks Mendo i know fonts are all wrong...Never figured out which one they are yet but im getting close lol

since there is no one who is willing to share "knowledge" with you, i will tell you it is: "itc elan book" font. since no one is willing to share it, i guess you will have to pay for it.

see you around.

The fonts were already named off in the card making for newppl thread back on bandai. The specific sizings and such are not however. Also, there are multiple fonts on cards.

Elan ITC std "Book", Allencon Demo, and Times New Roman are the fonts I use on my cards.

I use..Elan ITC std "Book" and "Medium" ,Allencon Demo, Times New Roman and thats about it. I can say it is all about specific sizing's. A lot of time went into getting the sizing's as close as possible.