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sephuji
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PostSubject: Cloud cards updated   Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:27 pm

Redoing Jutsu ATM

The first ones cost is ripped off of other cards you can tell










My first mission


I tried to put a shadow on her not sure if i did it right



Yeah male is in wrong place im bad a checking my work I only checked like 5 times
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Tue Mar 16, 2010 12:53 am

Alright, you got a bit to go visual wise on your cards to perfect them, but I'm guessing your not using PS so i can't help much there.

So on card 1 the proper wording, (or at least closer) if your doing the dual target thing would be. "If you payed for this Jutsu card with 3 of your "Water" Chakras then, change the effect of Target (1) to the following: "Discard all of your Chakras". If you payed for this Jutsu card with your "Lightning" Chakras then, Target (2) is unaffected by your opponent's effects during this turn and the next."


Now for Omoi:
"During the Exchange of Jutsu, you can discard 2 of your "Lightning" Chakras. In that case, this Ninja's Team and the Team Battling against it perform a Mental Power Battle during this turn.
Valid: During the Exchange of Jutsu you can discard 1 of your "Lighting" Chakras. In that case, move this Ninja in to one of your Teams with 5 or more Team Mental Power.

Using these 2 fixed effects as references try to get a grasp of proper wording in this game to make your cards better. Things like Phases and Symbols, are keywords that are always Caps.
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Tue Mar 16, 2010 1:16 am

mendokuse wrote:
Alright, you got a bit to go visual wise on your cards to perfect them, but I'm guessing your not using PS so i can't help much there.

So on card 1 the proper wording, (or at least closer) if your doing the dual target thing would be. "If you payed for this Jutsu card with 3 of your "Water" Chakras then, change the effect of Target (1) to the following: "Discard all of your Chakras". If you payed for this Jutsu card with your "Lightning" Chakras then, Target (2) is unaffected by your opponent's effects during this turn and the next."


Now for Omoi:
"During the Exchange of Jutsu, you can discard 2 of your "Lightning" Chakras. In that case, this Ninja's Team and the Team Battling against it perform a Mental Power Battle during this turn.
Valid: During the Exchange of Jutsu you can discard 1 of your "Lighting" Chakras. In that case, move this Ninja in to one of your Teams with 5 or more Team Mental Power.

Using these 2 fixed effects as references try to get a grasp of proper wording in this game to make your cards better. Things like Phases and Symbols, are keywords that are always Caps.

thanks I know I did the correct wording starting from scratch on the justsu but pasted cost in middle and my dumbass saved not up for round 3 it would win again Sad


PS do you have a lightning mission template
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Tue Mar 16, 2010 1:23 pm

I posted the mission up just wondering if there is anything I can do different everyone has been so nice at helping me
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Tue Mar 16, 2010 7:30 pm

I like the direction you're heading with the last few cards you posted. There is some really interesting interaction between the cards that seems to be a reincarnation of the recycle archetype lightning has always been good at. Keep it up!

I think you've got the right idea on the white outline, but I also think you should try making it a bit thicker next time.
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:14 pm

Lovely Ino wrote:
I like the direction you're heading with the last few cards you posted. There is some really interesting interaction between the cards that seems to be a reincarnation of the recycle archetype lightning has always been good at. Keep it up!

I think you've got the right idea on the white outline, but I also think you should try making it a bit thicker next time.

Ok thank you I was wondering if anyone noticed and I dont want it like it was mill draw recycle I want a full combo

ex 3 maybe for outline

I do test play all the cards I make for interaction my friends all want to play using them and its cool the game dose not get boring this way
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:17 pm

added 3 new cards
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Thu Mar 18, 2010 3:07 am

I don't mean to sound offensive, but if you have problems with spelling, it might help you to first type your effects in Word or another application with a spell checker. The jutsu card in particular has a lot of spelling errors. I think typing the effect out separately helps in other ways too, since it helps you focus on how to word the effect properly.
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:40 pm

Lovely Ino wrote:
I don't mean to sound offensive, but if you have problems with spelling, it might help you to first type your effects in Word or another application with a spell checker. The jutsu card in particular has a lot of spelling errors. I think typing the effect out separately helps in other ways too, since it helps you focus on how to word the effect properly.

I redid release and gotun Im going to redo soon probobley

Release should be correct i spent 40 min double checking with cards to make sure its all right

And Im starting to get gimp down pat now so less mess up do to not having to rest whole card woot
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PostSubject: Re: Cloud cards updated   Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:29 am

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