I Challange Mendo!!!

I Challange you mendo.

Ok, whats the challenge?

mendokuse wrote:

Ok, whats the challenge?

to see who can make the best card.hehe

chidoricurrent2 wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Ok, whats the challenge?

to see who can make the best card.hehe

So 1 on 1 any specifics? Like Fave Characters? Ninja, Jutsu, or Mission? or are we just playing free style 1 on 1 best card wins.

Judges? Anyone plz? I say we have 2.

mendokuse wrote:

chidoricurrent2 wrote:

mendokuse wrote:

Ok, whats the challenge?

to see who can make the best card.hehe

So 1 on 1 any specifics? Like Fave Characters? Ninja, Jutsu, or Mission? or are we just playing free style 1 on 1 best card wins.

Judges? Anyone plz? I say we have 2.

i agree on the judges.playing free style,but Ninjas only.

Naruto4ever can you judge?

yea i can

i can be the other judge.

Judges set let it begin.

Here's Mine, plz don't judge until both are posted.

mendokuse wrote:

Here's Mine, plz don't judge until both are posted.

nice i'll have mine posted soon i just now got back from vaca.

mendokuse wrote:

Here's Mine, plz don't judge until both are posted.

here you go.btw i used ps and gimp.



First preview of my new set.

-Mendokuse-


Picture 5/5
its original, cut out good, clear and has a solid white outline. although man sasori looks emo in it.

Text 5/5
again everything seems perfect. Nicely aligned, bandai font, good size.

Effect 4.5/5
well it just seems a little too powerful. I mean in a puppet deck this would kill. there's rarely chances you can overpower puppets unless you use them yourself. then the second effect,i don't see why its valid.

Overall 4.75/5
well that little thing with the effect is all i see. The card is really clumped together with all the text shoved that close together but if i remember correctly so was the acctual sasori puppet mode. Nice card like usual.

Total: 19.25/20

-chidoricurrent-


Picture 4.75/5
The only problem is its too dark.

Text 4.5/5
well the text is right, but its a little too big. the effect name could be quite smaller, and the acctual effect could be smaller by a little aswell.

Effect 4.5/5
like mendo's, i still think its a little overpowered. just discard 2 cards to kill off a ninja? the starter sasuke had to discard 2 to negate a jutsu, where this one kills the ninja in total? i would either make it an extra card or give an enterence requirment for the ninja you destroy. i like the basic idea though and the second effect is good.

Overall 4.5/5
well overall there are a few problems but not much. the small things i mentioned like the text size and dark pic are what threw you off. I can tell your cards are getting alot better though so nice job.

Total:18.25/20

well here's my scores now its up to naruto4ever. Nice cards both of you.

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

-Mendokuse-


Picture 5/5
its original, cut out good, clear and has a solid white outline. although man sasori looks emo in it.

Text 5/5
again everything seems perfect. Nicely aligned, bandai font, good size.

Effect 4.5/5
well it just seems a little too powerful. I mean in a puppet deck this would kill. there's rarely chances you can overpower puppets unless you use them yourself. then the second effect,i don't see why its valid.

Overall 4.75/5
well that little thing with the effect is all i see. The card is really clumped together with all the text shoved that close together but if i remember correctly so was the acctual sasori puppet mode. Nice card like usual.

Total: 19.25/20

-chidoricurrent-


Picture 4.75/5
The only problem is its too dark.

Text 4.5/5
well the text is right, but its a little too big. the effect name could be quite smaller, and the acctual effect could be smaller by a little aswell.

Effect 4.5/5
like mendo's, i still think its a little overpowered. just discard 2 cards to kill off a ninja? the starter sasuke had to discard 2 to negate a jutsu, where this one kills the ninja in total? i would either make it an extra card or give an enterence requirment for the ninja you destroy. i like the basic idea though and the second effect is good.

Overall 4.5/5
well overall there are a few problems but not much. the small things i mentioned like the text size and dark pic are what threw you off. I can tell your cards are getting alot better though so nice job.

Total:18.25/20

well here's my scores now its up to naruto4ever. Nice cards both of you.

ok we have the same text size i think.right mendo size 10?.if your talking about the charecteristics i used sharp mendo used strong i due believe right mendo.

chidoricurrent2 wrote:

Anaki Uchiha wrote:

-Mendokuse-


Picture 5/5
its original, cut out good, clear and has a solid white outline. although man sasori looks emo in it.

Text 5/5
again everything seems perfect. Nicely aligned, bandai font, good size.

Effect 4.5/5
well it just seems a little too powerful. I mean in a puppet deck this would kill. there's rarely chances you can overpower puppets unless you use them yourself. then the second effect,i don't see why its valid.

Overall 4.75/5
well that little thing with the effect is all i see. The card is really clumped together with all the text shoved that close together but if i remember correctly so was the acctual sasori puppet mode. Nice card like usual.

Total: 19.25/20

-chidoricurrent-


Picture 4.75/5
The only problem is its too dark.

Text 4.5/5
well the text is right, but its a little too big. the effect name could be quite smaller, and the acctual effect could be smaller by a little aswell.

Effect 4.5/5
like mendo's, i still think its a little overpowered. just discard 2 cards to kill off a ninja? the starter sasuke had to discard 2 to negate a jutsu, where this one kills the ninja in total? i would either make it an extra card or give an enterence requirment for the ninja you destroy. i like the basic idea though and the second effect is good.

Overall 4.5/5
well overall there are a few problems but not much. the small things i mentioned like the text size and dark pic are what threw you off. I can tell your cards are getting alot better though so nice job.

Total:18.25/20

well here's my scores now its up to naruto4ever. Nice cards both of you.

ok we have the same text size i think.right mendo size 10?.if your talking about the charecteristics i used sharp mendo used strong i due believe right mendo.

IDK, I can't remember that stuff and I had to shrink my text to fit it on the card. And quick thing to anaki the reason its valid is cause it was valid on the real card.

-Mendokuse-


Picture 4.75/5
Well as awesome as it is its not naruto anime standards. So you lost .25 on that otherwise its awesome

Text 5/5
Well i must say you've mastered the font nicely.

Effect 4.75/5
Like Anaki said i does seem overpowered...at least you didn't make it unaffected by your opponents effect.

Overall 5/5
Well you did nice the Valid: thing i check on its all good so nice card.

Total: 19.5/20

-chidoricurrent-


Picture 4.5/5
Ok well this doesnt fit the naruto anime coloring but then its far to dark i know ive seen it brighter.

Text 4.5/5
Well i believe you have the right font but its formated the wrong way.

Effect 4/5
Exchange of Jutsu...caps, discard no caps, opponent's,Battling, Pile. There are the mistakes in the effect.

Overall 4.5/5
Minor flaws nothing major the stats are not what we have for the set lol. So it looks good besides the sutff Snaki mentioned.

Total:17.5/20

Ok there you go. Just work on that text formating chidori and your cards will start to look alot better. It doesnt take that long to figure out the format if you know where to look.