Effect Help.

Have you ever lost points in a tournament because your effect wasnt perfect? Ill tell you this i have! Well here you can post the effect you want to use and people can proof read it and fix it up to look like Bandai's, a member or mod can help it doesnt matter just post your effect and wait if you dont get a reply quickly its ok wait a day if nothing happens still PM some one but try it here! (This is for both Naruto and DBZ)

I will not mind (depends what I'm doing at that moment in time if you PM me.) helping with this. I am really good at getting the wording right in both of them. But if its a paragraph long effect your on your own. XD

Note: DBZ's wording is really weird and a little hard to word right.

definately a good idea. it happens to me often too.

There's controversy between me and naruto4ever on this effect:|

[TOAD SAGE]
When this Ninja is put in play, discard X amount of your in-play Ninjas. In that case, place X amount of Growth coins on this Ninja.

Valid: This Ninja cannot be the target of your opponent's effects.


It's for Naruto when he returns to Konoha in Chapter 430. I mean, it's broken, but then again, he's Naruto! I was thinking on adding: X cannot be greater than 3. Lol, imaging if I put X < 3.

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

There's controversy between me and naruto4ever on this effect:|

[TOAD SAGE]
When this Ninja is put in play, discard X amount of your in-play Ninjas. In that case, place X amount of Growth coins on this Ninja.

Valid: This Ninja cannot be the target of your opponent's effects.


It's for Naruto when he returns to Konoha in Chapter 430. I mean, it's broken, but then again, he's Naruto! I was thinking on adding: X cannot be greater than 3. Lol, imaging if I put X < 3.

Dang ill answer this i cant even remember the card you made for this but try wording it like this lol.

[TOAD SAGE]
When this Ninja is deployed, you can discard X amount of your in-play Ninjas. In that case, give this Ninja a Growth coin for every Ninja discarded by this effect.

Valid: This Ninja cannot be affected by your opponents effects.

naruto4ever wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

There's controversy between me and naruto4ever on this effect:|

[TOAD SAGE]
When this Ninja is put in play, discard X amount of your in-play Ninjas. In that case, place X amount of Growth coins on this Ninja.

Valid: This Ninja cannot be the target of your opponent's effects.


It's for Naruto when he returns to Konoha in Chapter 430. I mean, it's broken, but then again, he's Naruto! I was thinking on adding: X cannot be greater than 3. Lol, imaging if I put X < 3.

Dang ill answer this i cant even remember the card you made for this but try wording it like this lol.

[TOAD SAGE]
When this Ninja is deployed, you can discard X amount of your in-play Ninjas. In that case, give this Ninja a Growth coin for every Ninja discarded by this effect.

Valid: This Ninja cannot be affected by your opponents effects.

You forgot the 's for opponent's. effects. Also did he mean put in play or deployed because there is a big difference. Other than that your wording is definitely correct.

Hey,l I'm making a Crystal Ice Mirrors and don't know how much it should cost.

Requirements: "Haku"
Target: User
Effect: If this Ninja recieves 1 Damage due to the Showdown, negate the Damage. If this Ninja recieves 2 Damage due to the Showdown, reduce the Damage to 1.

Chibi Clone wrote:

Hey,l I'm making a Crystal Ice Mirrors and don't know how much it should cost.

Requirements: "Haku"
Target: User
Effect: If this Ninja recieves 1 Damage due to the Showdown, negate the Damage. If this Ninja recieves 2 Damage due to the Showdown, reduce the Damage to 1.

copycat ;P

You copied Naruto4ever's Haku card =/

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Chibi Clone wrote:

Hey,l I'm making a Crystal Ice Mirrors and don't know how much it should cost.

Requirements: "Haku"
Target: User
Effect: If this Ninja recieves 1 Damage due to the Showdown, negate the Damage. If this Ninja recieves 2 Damage due to the Showdown, reduce the Damage to 1.

copycat ;P

You copied Naruto4ever's Haku card =/

What Haku card?

Chibi Clone wrote:

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:

Chibi Clone wrote:

Hey,l I'm making a Crystal Ice Mirrors and don't know how much it should cost.

Requirements: "Haku"
Target: User
Effect: If this Ninja recieves 1 Damage due to the Showdown, negate the Damage. If this Ninja recieves 2 Damage due to the Showdown, reduce the Damage to 1.

copycat ;P

You copied Naruto4ever's Haku card =/

What Haku card?

The one entered in my contest.

cna someone help me with an effect for a naruto/pein card i'm making, i can't think of an effect...

tobi is obito wrote:

cna someone help me with an effect for a naruto/pein card i'm making, i can't think of an effect...

How about something having to do with the fact that both of them were Jiraiya's pupils. I would give you more but I'm also blanking, sry.

mendokuse wrote:

tobi is obito wrote:

cna someone help me with an effect for a naruto/pein card i'm making, i can't think of an effect...

How about something having to do with the fact that both of them were Jiraiya's pupils. I would give you more but I'm also blanking, sry.

hhmm...something along the lines of that will work thanks!

tobi is obito wrote:

cna someone help me with an effect for a naruto/pein card i'm making, i can't think of an effect...

Try something along the line of this

[THE PAST AND THE PRESENT]

Valid: When this Ninja is put in play by sending your in play Pein to the discard pile Draw 2 cards. When this Ninja is put in play by sending your in play Naruto Uzumaki to the Discard pile search your deck you 1 "Jiraiya" Ninja can and place it in your hand. Then shuffle your deck.

Maybe it isnt the greatest but its something.

How much should this Jutsu cost + what should the rarity be? If it's super-worthy can you help me make it a rare?

Requirements: "Sage"
Target: (1) User (2) 1 Ninja Battling against the user
Effect Give Target (1) +10/+0. In addition, Discard Target (2).

Chibi Clone wrote:

How much should this Jutsu cost + what should the rarity be? If it's super-worthy can you help me make it a rare?

Requirements: "Sage"
Target: (1) User (2) 1 Ninja Battling against the user
Effect Give Target (1) +10/+0. In addition, Discard Target (2).

that defeats the point of "what should the rarity be"... and that card is broken. target 2 should take 2 damage, not be discarded

Im trying to make an Anbu Itachi card and just wanna know if its worded right:
During your Mission phase, Discard 1 Ninja in this Ninja’s Team. In that case, this Ninja becomes a Stand-by Ninja for the turn. This Ninja gets +1/+1 and is unaffected by your opponent’s Mission cards next turn.
Im thinking of making it a rare what do you guys think?
Also what do you think is a better name?
Itachi Uchiha
or
Anbu Itachi

Chibi Clone wrote:

Im trying to make an Anbu Itachi card and just wanna know if its worded right:
During your Mission phase, Discard 1 Ninja in this Ninja’s Team. In that case, this Ninja becomes a Stand-by Ninja for the turn. This Ninja gets +1/+1 and is unaffected by your opponent’s Mission cards next turn.
Im thinking of making it a rare what do you guys think?
Also what do you think is a better name?
Itachi Uchiha
or
Anbu Itachi

"During your Mission phase you can discard 1 Ninja in this Ninja’s Team. In
that case, this Ninja becomes a Stand-by Ninja for the turn. This Ninja
gets +1/+1 and is unaffected by the effects of your opponent’s Mission cards next turn."

I think thats right, and stick to Itachi Uchiha.