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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:47 am

Mines fine..... ??
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:48 am

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Mines fine..... ??

maybe its just us then.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:33 pm

Alright, here's what i threw together.


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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:54 pm

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Alright, here's what i threw together.
Picture - 3.5/5. The outline is a little bit choppy in some areas (-.5), the picture is not animaic (-1)

Text: 4.75/5. The text goes a little too far down the text box and is not the same size as the name (-.25)

Effect: 4.5/5. I don't get it, what's the point of a higher entrance cost if it only allows her to use 1 Jutsu card?

Overall: 5/5. Not bad at all... looks close to bandai's other than the pic. Unique effect...

Playability: 5/5

Total: 23.75/25 ; 47.25/50

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Picture: 5/5. Nothing wrong with it.

Text: 3.5/5 The text isn't formatted correctly and is too dark in the body.

Effect: 4/5. Not broken, but just really near the line.

Overall: 5/5

Playability: 4/5. Not broken, but a little too good

Total: 21.5/25 ; 43/50
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Picture: 5/5

Text: 4/5. The text isn't formatted correctly.

Effect: 3/5. Worded wrong near the end ; it would be "You may search your Deck or Discard pile for a Jutsu card with "Hinata Hyuga", "Neji Hyuga", or "Byakugan" in its "Requirements", show it to your opponent, and place it in your hand. Then, shuffle your Deck."

Overall: 4/5

Playability: 5/5

Total: 21/25 ; 42/50


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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:11 pm

For the Ninja Effect did I really lose points just cause you don't understand it? By giving +1 entrance cost it makes it so she can be a user of all byakugan jutsus because she is byakugan + 4, as for the blocker many hinata jutsus require to be a blocker yet she had learned how to use it offensively also so that is the point of making her a blocker.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:19 pm

okay, shadow shikamaru, how exactely are you judging, both the x/25 and x/50 are confusing, how are you getting the 50?
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:21 pm

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
okay, shadow shikamaru, how exactely are you judging, both the x/25 and x/50 are confusing, how are you getting the 50?
Read first post your supposed to judge by 50's.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:24 pm

mendokuse wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
okay, shadow shikamaru, how exactely are you judging, both the x/25 and x/50 are confusing, how are you getting the 50?
Read first post your supposed to judge by 50's.

and I just doubled his score, so a 25/25 would be a 50/50
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:31 pm

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mendokuse wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
okay, shadow shikamaru, how exactely are you judging, both the x/25 and x/50 are confusing, how are you getting the 50?
Read first post your supposed to judge by 50's.

and I just doubled his score, so a 25/25 would be a 50/50
oh, ok i get it now. judge the reg 5 points for everything, double the scores, then each card has a total of x/100. okay, i'll judge now.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:59 pm

Okay, first i'll judge mendokuse's cards.


picture 4/5
its a little too bright, and whats with hinata in it, her face is too long and the pic overall dosen't look the greatest.

text 4.5/5
the acctuall effect text looks too bold, but other than that its pretty good.

Effect 5/5
I like the effect. she gets +1 enterence cost to use more byakugan jutsu like 8 trigrams large palm rotation and such. then with the second effect, she can use certain jutsu that require blocker ninja, for instance her 8 trigrams defense they made.

playability 5/5
seems good.

overall 4.5/5
not bad all together. i think her reg. injured stats are 3/2, and the pic still looks odd, but overall its a decent card.

total: 23/25 = 46/50


picture 5/5
it looks fine to me.

text 4.5/5
it looks a little too big, but other than that its good.

effect 5/5
nice effect. Its fitting for a hinata style jutsu, and the last effect make's it really useful.

playability 3.75/5
it says select and effect then return it to your hand, so does that mean the jutsu can be used multiple times per turn? I would have put it returns to your hand after the jutsu has been fully resolved, or something else to clarify that.


overall 4.75/5
it looks pretty good to me. you have a few small errors here and there, but nothing too major.

total: 23/25 = 46/50



picture 5/5
looks fine.

text 4.5/5
the flavor text looks a little too large, but besides that its good.

effect 5/5
the effect is good. Its balance, and its a really a card that i would like to see made. it would definately make a boost to byakugan decks.

playability 5/5

overall 4.75/5
well, except for the flavor text, and the shippuden/masashi kishimoto thing at the bottom being a little hard to readl, it all seems good.

total: 24.25/25 = 48.5/50
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:16 am

Well first off sorry mendo if my cards arent top quality like you were expected but its the best i could do in the time i had. So here are my cards. At least every thing is worded right.(deidara pic by Shadow Shikamaru)


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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:52 am

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Well first off sorry mendo if my cards arent top quality like you were expected but its the best i could do in the time i had. So here are my cards. At least every thing is worded right.(deidara pic by Shadow Shikamaru)
Picture: 5/5. Not gonna get picky with this one... considering I rendered it...

Text - 5/5. Nothing bad at ALL!

Effect - 5/5

Playability - 5/5. I would definately play it.

Overall - 4.75/5

Total: 24.5/25 ; 49.5/50

Quote :

Pic: 5/5

Text: 5/5...

Effect: 4.95/5. My only qualm would be to make the target take 1 Damage. Then, it would be suffocating.

Playability: 5/5 Definitely playable

Overall: 4.95/5

Total: 24.9/25 ; 49.8/50
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Picture: 4/5. Just a wee bit blurry

Text: 4.5/5. The name looks a bit pixelated

Effect: 5/5.

Playability: 5/5.

Overall: 4.625/5

Total: 23.125/25 ; 46.25/50
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sat Mar 28, 2009 12:34 am

Ummm, is this thing ever gonna end? Judges?!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sat Mar 28, 2009 11:24 am

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Ummm, is this thing ever gonna end? Judges?!!!!!
sorry for that, i've been on vacation, and haven't been on the internet until now. i'm still in the middle of the vacation, but I should have like 5 or 10 minutes to judge.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sat Mar 28, 2009 11:51 am

well, i'll judge naruto4ever's cards now. sorry it took so long.


picture 5/5
It looks fine. non-blurry,good white outline, fits perfect.

text 5/5
looks perfect.

effect 5/5
its balanced, a really good effect, and suits deidara.

playablitliy 5/5
like shadow shika, I would play it too.

overall 5/5
I must say i think its perfect. I don't think i've ever seen such good a card. if you posted this on the bandai website, i bet half of them would think its a preview lol. seriously though, excellent job.

total: 25/25 50/50



picture 4.85/5
looks a little blurry in some spots, but overall not bad.

text 5/5
looks great.

effect 5/5
seems good to me. you could'nt hit those ninja's that say cant be effected by justu, but you could definately stop other anoying cards like the negation kakashi.

playabiltiy 5/5
pretty good.

overall 4.85/5
not much wrong at all. the effect is unique, i had to say that. When you had to make a deidara jutsu, i was expecting another bomb justu, so this one is surprising and funny aswell. so like normal, excellent job.

total: 24.7/25 49.4/50



picture 4.75/5
looks a little blurry.

text 4.95/5
hmm, the only thing i see is that the s and t in destruction look to be connected.

effect 5/5
looks good to me. I would've made it a super, and have the hand cost be x, then i would say give 1 damage to each of your opponents ninja's with an enterence cost of X or less. X is the value of this cards hand cost.
but thats just what i would like it to be. yours works fine though.

playablity 4.75/5
works good. I don't think it would be used that much seeing as how your ninja's get bombed too, but thats just me.

overall 4.5/5
there are more mistakes on this card than the other 2, but its still a pretty good card.

total: 23.95/25 47.9/50
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:13 pm

so the best card for n4e was a 99.5/100...

mendo, you lost it... good job though
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:55 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
so the best card for n4e was a 99.5/100...

mendo, you lost it... good job though
Sad, but good match. Hopefully next time I'll lose to better quality cards though cause I saw a crap load of mistakes on those not even pointed out by the judges, not saying that i didnt have my share that were missed either.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendokuse Vrs. Naruto4ever   Sun Mar 29, 2009 12:05 pm

mendokuse wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
so the best card for n4e was a 99.5/100...

mendo, you lost it... good job though
Sad, but good match. Hopefully next time I'll lose to better quality cards though cause I saw a crap load of mistakes on those not even pointed out by the judges, not saying that i didnt have my share that were missed either.
hm, really? like what? i know the judging is already over, but I would like to know what we missed so we can judge better next time around.
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