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PostSubject: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:11 am

Alright, I made a card for Thayli's tourney and won by default so who wants to challenge it? It's not my best card so come on who's up?
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:31 pm

Me!
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:50 pm

Cool, calling all judges, who wants to judge?
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 6:02 pm

Maybe any 1 or 2 of these people can judge:
N4E
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Anaki
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:28 pm

Ill taking a judgeing position. ShadowShika got grounded so i dont think he'll be on.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:32 pm

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Ill taking a judgeing position. ShadowShika got grounded so i dont think he'll be on.
Hmm, that bites for SS.

Anyways, here's my card.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:06 pm

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Picture-4.75/5 Looks great. The reason you lost .25 is because the outline on Sasuke is a tad sketchy in some parts, and the Kishimoto is a little blurry.

Text-4.75/5 I know you have the right font so i does look good. The reason why points were deducted is the Effect name brackets are not at the same level as the Effect name it's self. Also the M073 is the wrong font, or its a little to big.

Effect-5/5 Its a good sasuke effect. Im really suprised Bandai didnt make a sasuke with that effect. It is worded properly as well.

Overall-4.75/5 Again its a very nice card the template looks very nice and the stats fit him nicely with that effect. The only reason you lost points is because the picture isnt original.

Total:19.25/20
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:13 pm

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Picture-4.5/5 Looks good. You lost points because the outline is way off and the spacing for the effect is to large.

Text-4.75/5 Very nice. You lost points because the Valid: isnt properly formated. Additionally the C004 is worng

Effect-4.25/5 The spacing on the Effect name and the effect really hurt you on this one. Also you didnt get deducted for this but I think the effect should be: Valid: While you have an in play "Leaf" + "Genin" Ninja this Ninja gets "Clone Status".

Overall-4/5 Again sorry to keep deducting for this but you do it on almost all of your cards the spacing between the Effect name and the Effect. Also you lost points because the drop shadow on the flavor text is not correct. Also the Kishimoto is a tad blurry but not bad.

Total:17.5/20
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The winner for me is mendokuse. Chibi you did an excellent job just fix up some of the mistakes i pointed out and youll be on your way.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:27 pm

I also asked Anaki to Judge since SS can only be on for so long, guess we wait for a reply lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:30 am

mendokuse wrote:
I also asked Anaki to Judge since SS can only be on for so long, guess we wait for a reply lol.

I'll judge if you want
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:34 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
mendokuse wrote:
I also asked Anaki to Judge since SS can only be on for so long, guess we wait for a reply lol.

I'll judge if you want
well, i was going to judge, being he pmed me and everything, but if you want to its fine with me.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:38 am

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
mendokuse wrote:
I also asked Anaki to Judge since SS can only be on for so long, guess we wait for a reply lol.

I'll judge if you want
well, i was going to judge, being he pmed me and everything, but if you want to its fine with me.

i was making a last-ditch-effort thing
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:17 am

Don't care who judges just some one do it...
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:26 am

mendokuse wrote:
Don't care who judges just some one do it...
sorry, was going to but computer was screwed up.i'll judge now.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:34 am

mendokuse wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Ill taking a judgeing position. ShadowShika got grounded so i dont think he'll be on.
Hmm, that bites for SS.

Anyways, here's my card.
Picture 4.5/5
most of it's pretty good and the white outline is perfect, but its a little blurry in some spots.

text 5/5
text is perfect. i don't see anything wrong with it at all.

Effect/ec-hc/rarety/stats 5/5
wow, again, i cant find anything wrong. the stats go great, the ec/hc is fitting, and the effect is great and goes along with a rare.

overall 4.5/5
i think the tiny amount of blurryness in the picture is the only thing wrong. the the stats are great, its fitting as a rare, the effect is perfect for a sasuke, and its not overpowered. definately a really good card.

total:19/20.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:42 am

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picture 4.5/5
the picture is okay, but that pic is just way overused. and there are plenty of naruto pictures out there.

text 4/5
well, the name and characteristics are fine, but the flavor text is off, and the effect name is way too far down, along with the acctuall effect. other than that its good.

effect/ec-hc/rarety/stats 5/5
hmm, you did pretty good on this part, the effect is suitable for a common, the stats are regular, and it definately suits naruto well.

overall:4/5
some problems, like the text possitions and the flavor text need to be fixed, but you did quite well. its balanced and has a pretty realistic effect. oh, and i love the leaf symbol at the bottom. i'm suprised that hasn't been a set symbol yet.

total:17.5/20
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:43 am

so the winner is..

Mendokuse!!!
well, congrats. and i think you'll be giving naruto4ever a run for his money in this next match.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:42 am

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
so the winner is..

Mendokuse!!!
well, congrats. and i think you'll be giving naruto4ever a run for his money in this next match.
We'll see but thanks. I'm gonna try my hardest once I have free time.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:46 am

mendokuse wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
so the winner is..

Mendokuse!!!
well, congrats. and i think you'll be giving naruto4ever a run for his money in this next match.
We'll see but thanks. I'm gonna try my hardest once I have free time.

Trust me i had some time today and started its hard. Especially when im going up against someone like you. The effort im putting into these cards is insane. I have a feeling you will give me a run for my money. Especially because thinking of effects is HARD. Congrats on the win btw.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:49 am

naruto4ever wrote:
mendokuse wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
so the winner is..

Mendokuse!!!
well, congrats. and i think you'll be giving naruto4ever a run for his money in this next match.
We'll see but thanks. I'm gonna try my hardest once I have free time.

Trust me i had some time today and started its hard. Especially when im going up against someone like you. The effort im putting into these cards is insane. I have a feeling you will give me a run for my money. Especially because thinking of effects is HARD. Congrats on the win btw.
Thanks, I've been busy with an interview today, and tomorrow is my tourney, then a friend is coming in town sunday...lol So I'll probably get started either sunday or more likely monday, but spend this time trying to come up with effects and find pics.
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PostSubject: Re: Mendo vs ???   Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:52 am

mendokuse wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
mendokuse wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
so the winner is..

Mendokuse!!!
well, congrats. and i think you'll be giving naruto4ever a run for his money in this next match.
We'll see but thanks. I'm gonna try my hardest once I have free time.

Trust me i had some time today and started its hard. Especially when im going up against someone like you. The effort im putting into these cards is insane. I have a feeling you will give me a run for my money. Especially because thinking of effects is HARD. Congrats on the win btw.
Thanks, I've been busy with an interview today, and tomorrow is my tourney, then a friend is coming in town sunday...lol So I'll probably get started either sunday or more likely monday, but spend this time trying to come up with effects and find pics.
lol. well,good luck both of you.
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