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PostSubject: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:14 am

Looking for a match with some one let me know.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:06 am

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Looking for a match with some one let me know.

bring it on

we never started our other match, and i got better (i think)
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:40 am

Alright you.....ok mhm what to make what to make. I want the best judges we can get for this match some one with an eye for detail. I recomend Mendokuse if he can. Ill have to wait a little bit till my computer is back. So i can make a minty fresh card.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:51 am

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Alright you.....ok mhm what to make what to make. I want the best judges we can get for this match some one with an eye for detail. I recomend Mendokuse if he can. Ill have to wait a little bit till my computer is back. So i can make a minty fresh card.

or we could use our most recent card, meaning the sasuke for you and the hidan for me
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:55 am

If your ok with that sure but the sasuke isnt my best.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:06 pm

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If your ok with that sure but the sasuke isnt my best.

fine with me...
Now i have a chance!
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 8:39 pm

can i be a judge?
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 10:47 pm

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can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 10:57 pm

naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Tue Mar 10, 2009 11:04 pm

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can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:38 pm

naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:22 am

Wow you actually might but i wont be using Sasuke.....i still have a card i made b4 my comp crashed i havent posted yet.

Thanks Chibi Clone for the pic

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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:27 am

I wasn't officially asked but i did see that you wanted me to judge, if you want then use this judging if not then i got more practice either way its your choice.


naruto4ever wrote:

Quality:4.95/5
On close look there's some white still left attached to the sand symbol. That's all i can find.

Text:5/5
Seems perfect.

Effect:2.5/5
Soo broken, i see that you tried to balance it but this temari fits way to easily into decks such as NVS or non-wind decks. You just put 2-3 of her in since these decks dont have many wind, that means your hand takes barley any blow and your opponent eaither looses its early game nins that it needs to hold of the rush or for late game decks it looses its hand costs for later leaving them to give up needed cards. Do you understand why I consider it broken?

Creativity:5/5
Pic and effect are both darn awesome.

Total:17.45/20

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Quality:3.25/5
Placements of symbol, EC, and HC are all off.
EC + HC are messy along with the upper stats bar.
Slime symbol should be white its a bit brownish.
Pic is a bit pixelated.
Way too strong for a turn 5 even with the downside. Think turn 6 would have been better.

Text:4.5/5
Spacing between effect name and effect is too close and effect font is too small, should be same or very close too effect names size.

Effect:4.75/5
Effects good, only thing i can say is i think it would do better as a SR.

Creativity:4.75/5
I can't believe you even found a katsuya pic so props there. And the effect minus the downside seems sorta unique, hasn't been done in that combo but still a +2 and OC status isnt "that" unique sorta just a combo of existing things.

Total:17.25/20


Sooo close both of you.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:51 am

Oh wow that was a very close one there but still 1 more judge to go. Thanks Mendokuse you are a very good judge. Can i ask you how to fix up my effect tho?
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:14 am

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Oh wow that was a very close one there but still 1 more judge to go. Thanks Mendokuse you are a very good judge. Can i ask you how to fix up my effect tho?

Either force her to be in a wind deck like giving her hand cost that means she would is guaranteed to deal a blow to both.

Or you could make it hurt both ppl though i dont think that would make her any good.

Or lastly add a little text at the end saying if you dont have any wind in your hand it fails.

The 1st and 3rd are the best options imo, 1st is probably the most reasonable. Or at least thats what I think. How about you? Am I just crazy and in my own world on this?
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:17 pm

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 4.85/5
the only thing I see wrong is that the effect needs to be a little more spaced in between the effect name.

stats/rarety/Effect 3.75/5
well, for one, she's a turn 5, with more power than the turn 7? also, you could make a team just her and tsunade as a 11? and I guess the effect isn't all that good considering the support would probably be more useful.

Overall 4/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:16.6. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:10 pm

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 4.85/5
the only thing I see wrong is that the effect needs to be a little more spaced in between the effect name.

compare it to a real card
its correct


stats/rarety/Effect 3.75/5
well, for one, she's a turn 5, with more power than the turn 7? also, you could make a team just her and tsunade as a 11? and I guess the effect isn't all that good considering the support would probably be more useful.

1st Bunta was turn 5 with 9 as stat

Overall 4/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:16.6. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:58 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 5/5
not much wrong.


stats/rarety/Effect 4.75/5
well, I think that the enterence cost should still be atleast a 6 becuase even though you mentioned the gamabunta. also,didn't he require summoning jutsu?

Overall 4.5/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:18.25. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
hmm, lets see. this better? and its only becuase these are my fault that i'm correcting them, sorry to have miss-judged a little.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:09 pm

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picture 4.95/5
i think if mendokuse didn't point out the white around the sand symbol, i wouldnt've found it, but if i look closely i can see it.

text 5/5
just like all your text, it looks perfect.

effect/stats/ec-hc/rarety 4/5
well, i do think it is broken, for the fact that if you put it in like a fire deck or a water deck, its free drops for nothing. so like mendo said, i would either give her a hand cost, or say maybe you have to select and discard atleast 2 or 3 cards in your hand. other than that its good.

overall 4.75/5. the effect is the only thing taking points away.

total: 18.7
wow, close on my end.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:42 pm

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 5/5
not much wrong.


stats/rarety/Effect 4.75/5
well, I think that the enterence cost should still be atleast a 6 becuase even though you mentioned the gamabunta. also,didn't he require summoning jutsu?

Overall 4.5/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:18.25. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
hmm, lets see. this better? and its only becuase these are my fault that i'm correcting them, sorry to have miss-judged a little.

lol just realized something... he (katsuyu) can't be put in play without Tsunade, meaning at least turn 7...
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:31 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 5/5
not much wrong.


stats/rarety/Effect 4.75/5
well, I think that the enterence cost should still be atleast a 6 becuase even though you mentioned the gamabunta. also,didn't he require summoning jutsu?

Overall 4.5/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:18.25. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
hmm, lets see. this better? and its only becuase these are my fault that i'm correcting them, sorry to have miss-judged a little.

lol just realized something... he (katsuyu) can't be put in play without Tsunade, meaning at least turn 7...
well your katsuyu can, just can't be sent out to battle. also, not if you have the t5 tsunade. finally, katsuyu's a boy?!Confused Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:10 am

Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
naruto4ever wrote:
Anaki Uchiha wrote:
can i be a judge?

If you can take the time a look for detail. If something is wrong points get deducted.
all right. i'll be sure to be verry accurate and be strick looking for every point.

Alright. So what do you say shika 1 judge or more?

don't matter
here's my card so i might just win:

Picture 4/5
like mendokuse said, i think the symbols are a little off and the pic looks slightly pixelated, but i think the symbols had to be that way so it dosen't cover the eyes.

text 5/5
not much wrong.


stats/rarety/Effect 4.75/5
well, I think that the enterence cost should still be atleast a 6 becuase even though you mentioned the gamabunta. also,didn't he require summoning jutsu?

Overall 4.5/5
not too many mistakes, but has a few small errors.

total:18.25. I got to get off now, but i'll judge naruto4ever's card later.
hmm, lets see. this better? and its only becuase these are my fault that i'm correcting them, sorry to have miss-judged a little.

lol just realized something... he (katsuyu) can't be put in play without Tsunade, meaning at least turn 7...
well your katsuyu can, just can't be sent out to battle. also, not if you have the t5 tsunade. finally, katsuyu's a boy?!Confused Shocked

yup...
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:50 am

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yup...
holly crap. never would've guessed that one. i guess i just didn't pay enough attention to this part lol cause i've read it.
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:09 pm

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yup...
holly crap. never would've guessed that one. i guess i just didn't pay enough attention to this part lol cause i've read it.
wait... if the high-pitched slug is a boy, then is the low-pitched snake and toad a boy?
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PostSubject: Re: N4E Vrs??   Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:22 pm

Well I know buntas a guy because if you remember the Naruto vrs Gaara match gamakichi state" This boy saved my life PAPS" So if im right a paps is a guy not a girl. manda on the other hand im not sure.
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