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 Who wants to try against mendo?

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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:10 am

naruto4ever wrote:


Ok well just finished its not my best work or i dont think it is but it should hold its own.

5/5 picture
I don't really see anything wrong. its a good pic, colored nicely, and fits good.

4.5/5 text
I see only one or two errors, the main one being the last line should read: for ever lightning chakra in your chakra area, not lightning chakra's.then, maybe the text could be a little bolder. other than that good.

5/5 effect/cost/rarety
everything seems good here. Nice effect, the cost is sufficient, and the rarety suits the card.

4.8/5 overall
Really nice card overall. Not many problems, and everything seems realistic. Only the really in-depth details need to be fixed and it could earn a full score. nice job.

Total Score:19.3/20

mendokuse wrote:
Ok let the battle of the double rasengans begin, its up to you now judges.

5/5 picture
nice picture. it looks good, is bright and cleanly colored, and fits the picture

5/5 text
I don't see anything wrong with the text either. its all a good size, neat, correctly edited, and looks real.

4.5/5 effect/cost/rarety
well, the only thing is that it may be too good. lets say they make a card like your sage naruto to get chakra, well for this card, you pay 3 lightning, 5 any chakra, and you can give damage to 5 ninjas, while getting +12?! I really like the effect, but I think it may be a little too good. maybe make it just +X. or maybe Y=X+2 or something. the cost and rarety both seem good though.

5/5 Overall
Well, exept for the effect being a little uber powerful, the card is basiclly perfect. Nice job.

Total Score:19.5

Wow, it came really close on my side. the win being by 2/10th a point.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:13 am

Sooooo,

Naruto4ever
total:37.8/40.

Mendokuse
Total: 38.3/40



The winner is Mendokuse by .5 of a point. nice job both of you.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:14 am

so the totals are:

Naruto4ever: 18.5 + 19.3 = 37.8/40

Mendokuse: 19 + 19.5 = 38.5/40

The winner is.................

MENDOKUSE
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 12:18 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
so the totals are:

Naruto4ever: 18.5 + 19.3 = 37.8/40

Mendokuse: 19 + 19.5 = 38.5/40

The winner is.................

MENDOKUSE
well,one of us are wrong with points, but either way the winner is the same. still, nice job both of you.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:20 am

Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:51 am

mendokuse wrote:
Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.

how about you and me now?
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:52 am

Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 3:52 am

Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 6:18 am

naruto4ever wrote:
Good game mendo your card was nice. Just a few thing that really were sticking out when i first saw it and could lose you major points in a tourney.
1. Make sure you line up the Requirements: Target: and Effect:, yours was off where the effect was
2. Its a little hard to get it right but try to put the appropriate swpace between all parts.

Those are just the major things that could save you in the future.

#1 i did notice and am surprised i didnt get nicked for. As for #2 yah thats hard.
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PostSubject: Re: Who wants to try against mendo?   Sat Feb 07, 2009 9:04 am

Shadow Shikamaru wrote:
mendokuse wrote:
Thanks guys, I hope to play against you again N4E.

how about you and me now?
Sure, it'll take me a bit though. I'll try to get one up by sunday or monday because first i have to make one for thayli's tourney and I'm playing at a tourney every saturday.
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