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 TOBI VS. ?????

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NineTailNaruto
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptySun Dec 14, 2008 11:08 pm

reading that sintence on the last post of the first page and then looking at that pic of naruto was perfect... Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyMon Dec 15, 2008 2:57 am

so we just need one more judging rightTOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 Confused


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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyMon Dec 15, 2008 2:58 am

Where are you Naruto4Ever!?!
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyTue Dec 16, 2008 6:38 am

tobi is obito wrote:
NineTailNaruto wrote:
tobi is obito wrote:
k one more...or should we just start now???

i fianlly got u another judge where the h$ll are u?
someones getting angry...
TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 Narutocards194

ill judge this in a sec same with the other card just needed to get them where i could see em
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyTue Dec 16, 2008 6:39 am

Chibinekomaru wrote:
You ready Tobi!?!
TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 SakuraHarunoSuccessor

So i can see it to judge
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyTue Dec 16, 2008 6:46 am

TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 Narutocards194

Pic-4/5 Its a little Blurry also the white out line is really good for paint but saying that i should also say it messes up the card and you didnt finish it by the legs.

Text-3/5 its readable but all bolded and it could be better.

Effect-3.5/5 Um i think it should be a super and it should read like this:
Valid: When this Ninja becomes the user of the "Rasengan" Jutsu card, you can reduce the cost of the Jutsu card by two "Lightning" Chakras.

At the begining of you turn if you have a "Jiraiya" in your Village you can give one Damage to one of your opponents Ninjas.

Overall 3/5 you forgot the leaf symbol the numbers are messy you have no pack # or symbol easy fix ups
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PostSubject: Re: TOBI VS. ?????   TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 EmptyTue Dec 16, 2008 6:54 am

TOBI VS. ????? - Page 2 SakuraHarunoSuccessor

Pic-3.5/5 Its fine a little slutty for sakura but you attempt at the outline makes it less than eye candy

Text-4/5 its legit but could be better

Effect-4.25/5 A good effect but should read like this
Valid:This Ninja can use Jutsu cards with "Requirements:Tsunade". When this Ninja becomes the user of a Jutsu card with "Requirements:Tsunade" the Jutsu cannot be negated.

Overall-3.75/5 Looks good but name text is bad,no rarity,no pack symbol or number,and the characteristics are meh.


Totals are:
tobi 13.5/20
Chibi 15.5/20

Sorry for not being leineant guys/gals its 2 in the morning here and i have school in 4 hours so give +2 to your overall scores and then youll be good.
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